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Post by redlegend26 on Sun Oct 24, 2010 12:31 pm

Name: Marrik Zirudon Hyuuga

Age: 18

Bloodline: Marrik was born as one of the greatest shinobi of the Hyuga clan. Marrik was taught by Kakashi Hatake of the Sharingan and Neji Hyuga of the Byakugan. Since Marrik Is part of the Hyuga clan he is able to use both the Byakugan and the gentle fist fighting styles. Also it is noted that Marrik is able to use a vast arsenal of lightning and water ninjutsu. Also, Marrik Is noted To Have a Much Higher level of the Byakugan called The Black Byakugan. The Black Byakugan also has its won fighting style called Jagged Fist instead of Gentle Fist.

Rank: Jonin

Classification: Known to be Konaha’s Storm Sage Because of his excelled use of Lightning and Water Style Techniques.

Village: Konaha (Village Hidden in the Leaves)

Alignment: Marrik fights for the side of the light. In a tough situation, he is willing to do what needs to be done no matter what the cost. Marrik is always ready to prepare himself for the worst of situations. He also has a very strong disliking to anyone who threatens the village he fights so hard to protect

Appearance: Marrik wears all black and long silver flak with medium sized black lightning bolts on the bottom. When Marrik fights, he takes off the flak jacket. He has Silver hair that comes to his back and a short spiked goatee similar to the Third Hokage, except the color is silver. When journeying around he has his hair in a chakra infused silver rubber band to keep it from popping. When Marrik fights, he takes the rubber band off. Marrik Also has 1 large scroll in that he carries around with him. That scrolls allow him to access Forbidden Jutsu and His Personal Summon Rai Dragon.

Personality: Marrik is a very Calm and Peaceful person. He always thinks on his feet and never says no to save anyone. Marrik says he is the way he is because of the world he lives in. Marrik is the type of person who never does anything without a reason. But Marrik has a strong relationship with the person around him that sometimes clouds his vision. When Marrik does speak or say something it’s either one of two things, he’s saying something serious, or he’s cracking a joke out of nowhere. Marrik believes that humor is the medicine to heal all wounds. Marrik thinks outward meaning he is always thinking about others and not himself. If Marrik were to get sick he’s the type of person who won’t let anyone know he’s sick because he doesn’t want to be a burden. Marrik’s favorite quote is when playing the Role of a Hero; you either die a hero, Or Live Long Enough to See Yourself Become the Enemy. Marrik's favorite food and drinks are Lemonade-flavored Sake and Boiled or Baked Potato.

History: Marrik was born in the early times of the 5th Hokage. Marrik never knew his parents but his father was told to be a Shinobi that actually fought alongside The Legendary Fourth Hokage! Marrik’s fathers name is Hotaru Hyuuga. Hotaru died in the Invasion of Orochimaru. He was said to be trying to deliver a message to The Third when he was struck down. Marrik’s Mother; Karina Hyuga died when Marrik became a Jonin of the Leaf Village. When Marrik was a child, he was often sheltered from the outside world by his mother because of her fear to loose him. In his childhood days, Marrik was under the training of Neji Hyuga. Marrik has always studied the ways of Neji. Marrik also states he wants to be just like Neji and master The Byakugan and Gentle Fist. Marrik’s Byakugan also helps him when he uses his lightning and water releases. Marrik has also trained with Kakashi Hatake of the Sharingan. After Marrik graduated and became a Joinin, He learned under Kakashi Hatake. Kakashi taught him how to Use and Perfect almost any Water and Lightning ninjutsu. Neji and Kakashi consider Marrik to be one of the most gifted ninja that Konaha has produced, some being Minato Namakaze, Kakashi Hatake, Neji Hyuga, Naruto Uzumaki, and Jiraiya. Marrik took part in The Pein Invasion of Konaha and He took part in the current Fourth Great Shinobi War against the First Hokage's brother Madara.

Specialty: Marrik specializes in lightning and water ninjutsu. His Byakugan has been mastered by the teachings of Neji Hyuuga and Kakashi Hatake. After Studying under Both Neji and Kakashi, Marrik still trained hard everyday so someday he would be able to be strong enough to be on the front line of defense and protect Konaha. Through rough and rigorous training, Marrik unlocked a secret about the Byakugan, a secret that even the creator did not know. Pushed his limit, Marrik Unlocks another form of the Byakugan, a much darker version. In this Stage of the Byakugan, The eyes become pitch black and there are more veins showing, but they become smaller. The Fighting style of Gentle Fist That Byakugan users’ use becomes Jagged Fist. Jagged Fist is more raw and untamed, but the power and accuracy are devastating. Because the Black Byakugan has a dire effect on the body, Marrik is limited to an hour of usage every three days. After using the Black Byakugan, The nerves in the eyes, nose, mouth, and ears become fragile and lead to a day Of Paralysis from the neck up. In the Jagged Fist State, Marrik developed a couple of jutsu. One of those jutsu is Marrik’s legacy, meaning that is one of the jutsu he is known for. The Name of That jutsu is called Forbidden Jutsu Neos Reanimation. This jutsu Allows Marrik and his summon Rai to give Both lightning and Water release chakra and Their Essence of Life (Body, Mind, And Soul) and They are able to Resurrect any dead person with all of their abilities and their strength. To perform this Jutsu, Rai is on one side and Marrik is on the other. Then Marrik gives his Raiton or Suiton chakra and Rai gives Raiton and Suiton Chakra, But they Both Must Give Their Essence of Life. Once they both give up those things, they are in the shape of a triangle, where Marrik is on one side, Rai is on the other side, and whoever they decide to summon is on the tip. When this jutsu is performed, the being that is reanimated is now alive and has their Body, Mind, and Soul, and is at their full fighting potential. But Marrik dies and so does his summon. That is why this jutsu is a last resort.

Summoning:
Rai Dragon- Rai is Marrik’s personal summoning. Rai Is a dragon that can transform into a staff that naturally absorbs only lighting and water release chakra that the user can use. Rai's staff form is similar to the Third Hokage's adamantine staff. Rai's staff form is all black with silver bolts of lightning on the end. To make Rai transform, Marrik must ask Rai first, and then Rai flies high in the sky into the clouds. Then you hear a loud boom of thunder and one lightning burst. The out of the sky comes a staff that lands in Marrik’s right hand. In Rai’s Staff Form, he can still talk but cannot cast any jutsu. His staff form is mainly used as a weapon for Marrik. Marrik stumbled across Jikiri Landing on his way to explore the land of lightning. When he got to The Landing a Dragon Elder approached him and told him that one of their own had fallen ill and was in need of a Lightning Ninjutsu Specialist. So Marrik told him he was not a Specialist, but he would try and help. So Marrik casted a Lightning Jutsu on the unconscious dragon and nothing happened, his Jutsu was not strong enough. Marrik though then to summon the scroll that Kakashi gave him In case of emergency. So Marrik summoned the scroll and it had a list of forbidden jutsu that he could perform. So Marrik Preformed Forbidden Jutsu Lightning Limelight Revised! This Jutsu used up more than half of Marrik's Chakra reserves, but at least he saved someone. The once ill dragon rose and thanked Marrik for saving his life. He told Marrik that he would be honored if He could be Marrik's personal summon. And from That day forth Rai became Marrik's personal summon and more importantly, a Trusted friend. Marrik and Rai are also able to perform Combo Jutsus, where Marrik Uses a Water Ninjutsu and Rai uses a Lightning Ninjutsu or vice versa. To Summon Rai, Marrik must draw blood on both his index and middle finger of his right hand. Then Draw a lightning Bolt in the center of his scroll with the bleeding fingers. Then he must make the summoning hand symbols, and then slam his right hand down on the lightning bolt that’s in the center of the scroll.



• Water Release: Violent Water Wave- Water gushes out from the mouth like a waterfall and washes away the enemy. One can freely control the power of this technique with the amount chakra one releases. Having many variations, this is a basic Water Release technique.

• Water Release: Water Dragon Bullet Technique- This technique shapes a large amount of water into a giant, powerful dragon, which hits the opponent with formidable might, dealing physical damage. The ideal place to use it is near a body of water, but if the caster's skill allows it, it is possible to use it even in a place where there is none. That said, the amount of water used will be in proportion with the caster's skill.

• Water Release: Water Encampment Wall- This defensive jutsu creates a wall of water around the user. Enemy attacks are completely intercepted by a fence of water blown out from the mouth, and is raised from below with tremendous might. The water is blown out in the form of a circle around the user, and it makes for a defense without openings. It is also possible for the user to control the amount of water and duration at will. The wall's strength and resistance change following the quantity of chakra poured down into the water, so a skillful shinobi will be able to build a sturdy one. Furthermore, because the field of vision is maintained even while defending one can easily go on to the next move, which is a great advantage. The wall can also be formed from a pre-existing water source.

• Water Release: Water Whip- The user creates a whip made of water that can wrap around the opponent. The user can also funnel lightning chakra to shock anyone wrapped in it

• Lightning Cutter- The Lightning Cutter is an enhanced form of the Chidori with the same effects and drawbacks, but more concentrated. It is said to have gained its name after Kakashi split a bolt of lightning with it. Because the Chidori is already powerful on its own, the Lightning Cutter requires better chakra control, which is exemplified in its appearance. The Chidori appears as simply a mass of white electrical chakra in the user's hand, while the Lightning Cutter is more focused and blue.

• Lightning Destruction- The user places his hands to the ground after converting their chakra in to lightning, then sending a powerful bolt of electricity that cuts through the ground in the direction of the target. The shape of the bolt is a triangle with the base in the direction of the user and the tip headed towards the target. It causes devastating destruction on its way and generates enough heat and power to destroy whatever it comes into contact with.

• Lightning Release: Electromagnetic Murder- This technique allows the user to create a wave of electricity from their hands. The user can vary its power from a small surge to shock an opponent to a powerful stream of lightning capable of ripping through solid rock. It is ideal to use in conjunction with a water technique.

• Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms- The Eight Trigrams Sixty-Four Palms is a maneuver of the Gentle Fist fighting style. It is reserved only for the Main branch of the Hyūga clan, though capable Branch members are able to reverse-engineer it. This technique is used to close off the flow of chakra through sixty-four chakra points of an opponent's Chakra Pathway System. This eliminates their ability to use chakra for quite some time and makes it difficult for them to move.

Once someone is within range of the user's field of divination, he or she assumes a Gentle Fist stance and begins to deliver the attack:

* First, two consecutive strikes to make two.
* Second, another two consecutive strikes to make four.
* Third, four consecutive strikes to make eight.
* Fourth, eight consecutive strikes to make sixteen.
* Fifth, sixteen consecutive strikes to make thirty two.
* Sixth, another thirty two consecutive strikes in succession to make a total of sixty four strikes.

• Eight Trigrams Three-Hundred-Sixty-One Palms- This jutsu allows the user to strike all 361 chakra points of the opponent, paralyzing them with each blow and instantly killing them upon the final hit. When using this technique, the speed of the user is comparable to that of the Reverse Lotus.


• Gentle Fist- The Gentle Fist - is a style of hand-to-hand combat that aims to inflict internal damage and disrupt a body's Chakra Pathway System so as to ultimately inhibit an opponent's use of chakra. To do this, the user surgically injects a small amount of their own chakra into an opponent's chakra pathway system. The infiltrating chakra can then be used to rupture or divert chakra flow, preventing them from using jutsu.

Targeting the Tenketsu can enhance the havoc and control a Jūken user can impose upon an opponent's chakra network. These special nodes, 361 in total, are key gate keeping interceptions in the chakra circulatory network, thus forcibly opening or sealing them in whatever manner the Jūken-user sees fit is a powerful tactical option to have. Harming the chakra network in this way can directly damage internal organs due to their proximity to the chakra circulatory system. Even the slightest tap can cause severe internal damage, hence the name "gentle" fist.

Forbidden Jutsu Neos Reanimation- This jutsu Allows Marrik and his summon Rai to give Both lightning and Water release chakra and Their Essence of Life (Body, Mind, And Soul) and They are able to Resurrect any dead person with all of their abilities and their strength. To perform this Jutsu, Rai is on one side and Marrik is on the other. Then Marrik gives his Raiton or Suiton chakra and Rai gives Raiton and Suiton Chakra, But they Both Must Give Their Essence of Life. Once they both give up those things, they are in the shape of a triangle, where Marrik is on one side, Rai is on the other side, and whoever they decide to summon is on the tip. When this jutsu is performed, the being that is reanimated is now alive and has their Body, Mind, and Soul, and is at their full fighting potential. But Marrik dies and so does his summon. That is why this jutsu is a last resort.

Summoning Combos-

Ninja Art White Lightning- White Lightning is simular to the Fourth Lord Hokage's Flying Thunder God Technique. With this technique though, Marrik can focus on any place within his point of view using his normal eyes or the enhanced vision of the Byakugan. Once the location has been pinpointed, Marrik's body vanishes into a stream of white light. Then, a huge bolt of White Lightning strikes down on the ground knocking back any nearby enemies, before Marrik reanimates.
Ninja Art Dance of Infinity- Rai transforms into his staff form and falls down from the sky with Marrik simultaneously jumping in the air to catch him. When Marrik grabs Rai, he lands down on the ground and spins him around and assumes his Gentle Fist Fighting Stance. Then he charges at his opponent and unleashes a devastating combo upon him. Swinging the staff with accuracy and divine grace, Marrik then watches his opponent fall to the ground before Rai transforms back into his Dragon form.

** Have not perfected Jagged Fist Jutsu yet
If possible, I would also like to master all lightning and water releases along with all Byakugan Dojutsu releases. Then perfect my Jagged Fist releases. Thanks !!


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Re: Marrik Hyuuga Character App.

Post by Xana on Sun Oct 24, 2010 1:03 pm

hmm...
i like everything :D
but, you can only have up to 10 jutsus :/

The water things take up 5 already, chidori is another one (6)
lightning cutter can be put as a variation of chidori
but if not, its another one which makes 7 :/
(make the variations orange so i dont count it as a jutsu itself)

are gentle fist and jagged fist bloodlines?
if not, then you're way over the jutsu limit
also, is lightning hound a summon? o.o

You have to make a seperate app for your summon, so take out summoning combos and the summon u put in (and you may only have 1 summon)

oh it would kinda help if you put in a lil description of all the jutsus :/

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Re: Marrik Hyuuga Character App.

Post by Xana on Sun Oct 24, 2010 4:33 pm

erm... instead of posting a revised form, why dont you edit it o.o;

plus, you have to make a separate app in the summon app section
then i or another mod or admin has to give the thumbs up
you cannot use it until it gets approved or else you get warned :/

do you have any bloodline jutsus?
cuz the black byakugan is one :/

imma delete the second post k?

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Re: Marrik Hyuuga Character App.

Post by redlegend26 on Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:01 pm

This is kinda getting annoying...= (

My bloodline jutsus are the ones involved with the Byakugan.. Like the gentle fist and the eight trigrams...

And ill make the summoning post...

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Post by Xana on Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:03 pm

lol sorry
well now i approve of it :D
(now imma move it once i figure out how)

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Post by redlegend26 on Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:05 pm

Alright thanks, and Ive made the summoning post.
Question, if I may.. When can I start Rp'ing...
Lol like i know what to do cause i have my own site..
But im ready to start l0l. = ) Excuse me if I come across a bit impatient l0l.

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Re: Marrik Hyuuga Character App.

Post by Xana on Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:07 pm

well...
i cant move it cuz my buddy bill (admin) forgot to tell me if i can move topics :/
i can approve of you summon sure, but this...
w8 till bill or an admin tells me how to move or they move it themselves
until then, hang tight :/

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Post by redlegend26 on Sun Oct 24, 2010 8:08 pm

Alright.. But im I able to Rp ?

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Post by Bill on Sun Oct 24, 2010 10:29 pm

Xana.. I've told you many times you may approve and move topics.. Lol.

Anyways App Approved.
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